Have you had your Holy communion?

On Sunday we went to my cousin’s house. But Before we went to my cousin’s house, my family and I went to church to celebrate my cousin’s first Holy communion. After I woke up, I went to put my blazing white T-shirt on and pants on. After I got changed we went to church  and I saw my cousin Faith. She was going to receive her first Holy Communion. So we went to find seat to sit down..Then the Mass started, we sang  like a lion in the church. When we started singing I saw my cousin wearing a white dress and  she looked like an angel. After Mass we went home.

When we got home I went with my sister and my mum to go and  get my cousin’s cake at Magere. On the way to Mangere, I fell asleep in the car. I woke up when we arrived to Mangere. I had to wait in the car until they came back. When they got back I opened the box. When I opened up  the box all I could see was white bright things shining at me. It has writing on the cake that said “Happy first Holy Communion Faith”.

When we got back we all had to get ready except for my mum and my sister because they looked after my mum's new born baby. I had to get change out of my nice clothes and into my home clothes. After I got changed out of my clothes we got into the car. When we got to my cousin’s house and there were a lot of people there including my cousin’s. I had to get things out of the car and take them inside the house.

After I bring the food inside I went outside to go play basketball. When we played I chose Matthew to be in my team. We were the first to score. So the score was one-zero.The person that scores a goal gets to continue the next play off. When the second round started again, we checked the ball first with the opposite team. My cousin blocked me from getting a goal, so we tied on the score.When he blocked me they got the ball then they got a goal. When they got a goal i got a goal, it was one all. Then they checked the ball and my cousin blocked him from getting goal but he still scored.

                                                                                                                                                                    After the basketball game we and all went inside to have some food. I had Sushi and chicken and it was yummy. After I finished eating I went on my cousin’s IPad and their Playstation. When I was playing on the Playstation we played “Black Ops Call of duty 2”, online. We invited people that were good at “Buried” and then we started playing. I got get a gun from the mystery box and  a Ray gun mark 2. Then I tried to free the big guy because he was one of the main characters in the game but I died in the 10th round. After I played on the Playstation we went home.

At my cousin’s house I had the best day ever. I hope we come back next time and have more yummy food.

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