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Thursday, 6 August 2015

Do You Want Siblings?

LI: Write persuasive piece of writing using Ethos,Pathos and Logos.

Brothers and sisters are compassionate and thoughtful. They are like a friends, but better because when you are upset they are there for you and when you are in a situation they back you up.

Brothers and sisters should always stick up for each other. When you’re bored you can go outside and play with them. When they play with them they’re very physical. You love your sisters and brothers because when you are exhausted you can just go home and have a sleep and they can comfort you when your little. We always want to be with our siblings but we all know that we have to be separated when we grow up. We all go through a process of a human life. very cool life.    

Sometimes when you have little siblings they always want to go outside and play out in the sun and when it’s raining  there are little puddles and they like to play in it, it’s like a little pool to them. If we are sick our brothers and sisters are there for you. You can always rely on your brothers and sisters, we have to take care of them because they’re relying on us too

Having siblings are the BEST!       

Tuesday, 4 August 2015

Cadbury Creme Egg





LI: Analyse text of identify examples of ethos, pathos, and logos
The Persuasive Reading Analysis:
Take another look at the persuasive piece of reading/ writing.
What strategies does the author use to try to persuade you?
Below are strategies writers often use for this form of writing.  Read through each
strategy and decide whether the author used that strategy by writing yes or no in the second column. If you write yes, then explain how the author used that strategy.
Persuasive strategy
Yes / No
How the author used it?
Claim – States the main  
point or stance
Yes
The writer very cleverly used the phrase:’ Don't get caught.’ At the beginning of the  advertisement and it is  repeated  throughout the ad.
Big Names –  Mentions experts and
important people to support the argument
No

Ethos – Tries to build trust and credibility
Yes
The writer has cleverly said “This little angel.” He said this so he could make the audience think that the girl is innocent and she did nothing wrong.  
Pathos – Appeals to the audience’s emotions
Yes
The writers says “The eggs are irresistible so hurry up before they’re all sold so go and get one now.” (Kairos)                                           
Logos – Uses logic, numbers, or  facts to support the argument

Yes
The writer tells us that the cadbury Creme egg taste like e.g Creamy milk, creamy flowing yolk and you can’t resist the two chocolate layers.  These are the facts about the chocolate eggs.
Kairos – Builds a sense of urgency  for the cause
Yes
The writer said that ‘The eggs are irresistible’, so if you don’t go to the shop’s now there will be none left.
Research – Uses studies and  
information to make the  
argument seem more convincing;  this can be in the form of words, graphs, tables, or illustrations.
Yes
The writer used knowledge about the eggs like what they are made of which is the facts he researched. layer.   

Analyse text to identify examples of ethos, pathos and logos. 

Monday, 3 August 2015

Psalms 4:5

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WALHT
Use the steps of Lectio Divina

Scripture reference:
Psalm 4:5 (A prayer for protection)

The words that stand out for me are:
This message to me is about helping us in a way of faith, speaking the truth, don’t trust the wicked or the people that does bad things on the road or anywhere else.




Wednesday, 29 July 2015

Our Father


7/28/15
Identify the number of petitions in the Our Father and what they are about
How many petitions in the Our Father:
3
The Our Father prayer:
Our Father, Who art in heaven
hallowed be thy name thy kingdom
come; thy will be done, in earth as
it is in heaven. Give us this
day our daily bread. And
forgive us our trespasses, as
we forgive those that trespass
us. And lead us not into
temptation; but deliver
us from evil.
Meaning 1
Give us this day our daily bread:
We ask God to give us the food we need and we also receive the bread at communion.
Meaning 2
Forgive us our trespasses:
We ask God to forgive us when we do wrong.
Meaning 3
But deliver us from evil:
We ask God the holy spirit to guide us and be with us when we make decisions.

Monday, 27 July 2015

Breakfast

Persuasive Reading Analysis:
Walht: Analyse text, identifying examples of: ethos, pathos and logos.
Take another look at the persuasive piece of reading/ writing.
What strategies does the author use to try to persuade you?
Below are strategies writers often use for this form of writing.  Read through each
strategy and decide whether the author used that strategy by writing yes or no in the second column. If you write yes, then explain how the author used that strategy.
Persuasive strategy
Yes / No
How the author used it?
Claim – States the main  
point or stance
Yes
The writer says “Breakfast is a very important meal for students”
Big Names –  Mentions experts and
important people to support the argument
No
The information is very detailed and suggest that the writer has conducted some research and is knowledgeable about the importance of breakfast. There is no mention of experts - it is inferred.
Logos – Uses logic, numbers, or  
facts to support the argument
Yes
The writer said “Not having breakfast changes your mood and the way you think.”
People who don’t eat breakfast:
  • lack energy and focus
  • cannot concentrate
  • Are Irritable
Pathos – Appeals to the audience’s emotions
No
Talks about moods and makes the audience
the effect of achievement without breakfast.                                                                        
Ethos – Tries to build trust and
credibility
Yes
The writer says “ Having something to eat in the morning is good to have in your daily routine and it’s healthy for you and your body
Kairos – Builds a sense of urgency  for the cause
Yes
Makes the reader think about the possible outcomes for people who don’t eat breakfast.
Research – Uses studies and  
information to make the  
argument seem more convincing;  
this can be in the form of words,
graphs, tables, or illustrations
Yes
She used facts to see more convincing about how breakfast helps us to be healthy.


Analyse text to identify examples of ethos, pathos and logos. 

Friday, 24 July 2015

Traditional prayers

Traditional prayers that I know:
  • The Apostle Creed                          
  • Our Father-Maori?
  • Adsumus
  • Hail Mary
  • Angelous
  • Nicene Creed      
  • Gloria` `
  • Carpenter
  • Act Of Hope
  • Act Of Faith
  • Apostle Creed
  • Glory Be  
  • Prayer Of Sorrow

  Forms of prayers
  • Liturgical Dance
  • Meditation
  • Sing
  • Journaling
  • Read The Bible